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Wednesday, 1 March 2017

What a jump!

This is the P6 student, Valencia, who I took for one lesson to drill her in the art of the compo πŸŽ‹

So in one lesson I kicked those bad habits out! She was so excited she wanted to show me her results instead of her regular tuition teacher πŸ˜†

She used to write like it was a personal recount. Where's the excitement ? So this time it's WAY better than what she wrote before, I'm so pleased! Yay Valencia!

Saturday, 4 February 2017

Mass for the Sick

I thought about this particular bulletin a lot when I was assigned to cover the mass. Would someone who never experienced this hardship, or know someone who has, understand what it means? 

Though it was edited to make it more refined the overall articles are there. 






Pope's Monthly Prayer Intentions

Pope Francis:

“[God] comes to visit us with his mercy, to lift us from the dust of our sins; he lends us a hand in rising from the abyss into which our pride has made us fall."

Each year the Holy Father asks for our prayers for specific intentions each month. This month we pray for…

Comfort for the Afflicted
That all those who are afflicted, especially the poor, refugees, and marginalised, may find welcome and comfort in our communities

Read more on Page 2

 











Pope’s Monthly Intentions ● FebOnce, Pope Francis asked where God is if there is evil present in the world; if there are people who are innocent but suffer hungry, lonely, homeless, and as exiles.

He then answered, “‘God is in them’. Jesus is in them; he suffers in them and deeply identifies with each of them.” As Jesus embraced the “wood of the cross” He embraced the suffering of all.

So when we welcome those who suffer, we welcome Him. When we are called to serve Him in all those who are marginalised in society, it is there we “find our God; there we touch the Lord.” But if we were to ignore them, the Pope says we are denying even Christ himself.

"In the face of evil, suffering and sin, the only response possible for a disciple of Jesus is the gift of self...in imitation of Christ; it is the attitude of service."
Pope’s Prayer Intention ● Scripture and ReflectionMatthew 25: 31-46

Neither group saw Jesus in the hungry, sick, and strangers, but one group had a heart like Jesus that was moved by suffering. The other group had hard hearts and Jesus said that there was no room in his heavenly kingdom for those with hard hearts. By their “sins of omission” they ended up “omitted.”

How am I challenged to reject sins of omission?

1 Corinthians 12: 12-26

The Body of Christ consists of Jesus, the Head, and all the baptised, parts who are joined to him. Thus, “if one part suffers, all the parts suffer with it.”

How do I find myself suffering when I see suffering in the world?

The team found my initial picture a bit too sombre. Hence the one I set as the feature image 

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Francis explained that it is God who "comes to visit us with his mercy, to lift us from the dust of our sins; he lends us a hand in rising from the abyss into which our pride has made us fall."

Tuesday, 3 January 2017

1st Book Review of 2017

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Review of Night School by C.J. Daugherty 


To tempt you I'm adding in a scene that anyone could just gush over.Mind you I typed it all out cause, well, duh.




Say hello to male leads Sylvain and Carter (had to omit some  things to keep the story a secret):




... "Now we shall enjoy the croquet."

"Yay," she replied weakly. "Croquet."

As they walked back around the corner, she could see that everyone had been waiting for them, including Carter, His eyes told her that he knew exactly what they'd been doing.

"Allie! Sylvain." His tone was mocking. "This is great. What have you been up to?"

Surprised by his aggression, Allie flushed with anger.

...

Sylvain pulled her closer. "Unfortunately, Carter, our teams are set already. We do not need  another player."

"I didn't come to play." Carter put emphasis on the last word.

...

He turned from Sylvain to her.

Allie felt as if a cool breeze had chilled her skin. "I... I'm fine, Carter. Thanks."

She faltered under his gaze, which seemed to challenge her. As if she'd done something bad, disappointed him in some way.

"That's great. You do seem much recovered." His words dripped sarcasm. "Did you hurt your lips, too? Or is it from something else?"

Allie's hand flew up to cover her mouth as Sylvain took several steps forward.

"Why are you still here, Carter?" he asked icily.

Carter stared at him, unflinching. "I just wanted to see if what I suspected was true."

"Seen all you need to see?" Sylvain's voice was low and menacing.

"Hey, everybody," Ruth stepped between them. "Come on. Stay calm. Let's not get into something here."

Carter ignored her. "Oh, I've seen enough, Sylvain."

With a sigh, Ruth stepped out of the way. They were now standing no more than a foot apart, glaring at each other.


READ IT - Night School by C.J. Daugherty

Good books don't let you know exactly what is going on till the end, especially if they're likely going to be made into a series.
That's what's been done here - till the wee few pages at the end will you get some sort of closure. And you know what? It's definitely NOT enough. I NEED MORE
It's the moment when you read and read and just wish you read faster because you want to know what's coming next. It's a truly special thing. 
Fair warning for those who love a paranormal YA story, just so you know, this isn't one. Though seriously, I wouldn't have guessed it! It surely seemed  to be headed in that direction and yet there's no mention. Heck, even the title is "Night School". So it's truly a gift C.J. has to be able to hold our attention as she has. The usual rustle in the brush, the creepy sinking feeling that there was someone or something there in the room while you slept, common in teen books but she writes it so well that you can't imagine it being cliched at all. I gots me the chills and I was devouring every bit of the book till like 2am, and I hardly read this fast, which is when I'm reviewing this because I got all excited about it. Loving every word of it. 
CJ writes really well. She's got wit, which is wonderful and highly necessary with writers (I had JUST read a story where the writing ruined what could have been an amazing idea - assuming what I had assumed about the title and synopsis, cause I couldn't read further than a certain point) 
If you're a total scaredy-cat like me, who doesn't like the dark and quiet when it's too quiet, don't read this at night. Also I don't think it helped that I was listening to "Fire". I swear the song replayed at the most opportune time - there, not spoiling anymore on that front.
You get full doses of suspense and intrigue as you try to decipher the hidden agendas of the Night School - it was so cool to have the 'cool' boys be from there - and the mysteriousness that's been plaguing the characters in the story. I was really trying to find out if any more surprises would pop up honestly, like the whole paranormal thing. Almost begging for it haha but the fact that there really is none surprised me, in a pleasant way. 
I didn't know that "boarding school" was a theme in stories, significantly in YA, so when I was reading reviews (as usual, after the book) it was an interesting tidbit to find out. I wasn't focused too much on it because it wasn't so outstanding. Basically you 'saw' the woods, Allie's room, and the typical school but hardly any "chase scenes" went on inside. Maybe just the roof. 
I was actually kinda shocked at the ending. It should have occured to me but it didn't, like what Carter said. Perhaps I was too into the book to think outside fangirl-squealing and mystery lover-shivering. 
There are quite a bit of characters here but the main ones I will obviously focus on are Allie, Sylvain (Yes, Sylvain) and Carter. 
However I do want to mention names: Jo, Rachel, Jules and Ruth. 
They're friends not enemies, hence my mentioning them. There's this tangled web linking them. Though the incident that happened to one of them was just jarring and saddening - I can still picture it in my mind, like the face of the Joker. *shudders* 
And for another...I suppose you can forgive the crazy somewhat when you finally realise what drove her. But I still didn't care for the Jekyll and Hyde thing. I can't remember when I said this exact same thing but it is a usual character trait in the books I read. 
Allie - I love her demeanour. She was already portrayed as someone who is 'troubled' but strong-willed, yet we saw her vulnerable sides, like when she was scared out of her mind (me too me too) and how good a person she is. She's probably what you'd consider the accidental heroine but of course she's not going to be dainty, how boring would that be. 
Sylvain ("Sil-VAN" as Allie put it)  - 
"Please do."
She followed the voice, with its French accent, to her left side, where a boy with tawny skin, thick dark hair, and exquisite blue eyes was watching her.

Carter - 
The room was empty save for one deep chair, where a boy sat watching them over the top of an ancient-looking book. He had straight black hair, a firm mouth, and huge dark eyes surrounded by thick lashes; his feet were propped casually on a tabletop painted like a chessboard. He studied her with a mixture of insolence and open curiosity that she found unnerving. She tried to keep her expression blank, but his lips curved up into a knowing smile.

Very happy to not read about another hot blonde. Dark hair is just as attractive
YA 101: guys gotta be AMAZING; and they ARE in this book. It's always fun for me to find new book eyecandy, so to speak. And their descriptions are far from boring - okay maybe Carter's is the typical badboy, cocky type but come on, you need those types. And Sylvain is the nice - oh so nice - FRENCH (kind of unusual for the mains) guy.
They both play the extremes - two sides of the same coin that fell for the main girl. Strong personalities that want to protect and don't hold back - you need this in your stories, ladies and gents.
For Carter he was more the free-r spirit than Sylvain, who wasn't stuffy by any means, but they both could walk on the wild side. I actually thought something bad was gonna sprout from Sylvain - cause he was TOOOOO nice - but I was sorely mistaken (yay haha)
They're both their own characters and I'm sorry to lump them together. I will reread and revise my statements! As for camps..I can't pick yet ;( huhu

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Allie Sheridan’s world is falling apart. Her brother’s run away from home. Her parents ignore her. And she’s just been arrested.

Again.

This time her parents have had enough. They cut her off from her friends and send her away to boarding school, far from her London friends.

But at Cimmeria Academy, Allie is soon caught up in the strange activities of a secret group of elite students.

When she’s attacked late one night the incident sets off a chain of increasingly violent events. As the school begins to seem like a very dangerous place, she finds out that nothing at Cimmeria is what it seems to be.

And that she is not who she thought she was.

The back cover says
Sent away from home,
Allie Sheridan will discover
a new LIFE
a world of MYSTERY
a world of SECRETS
a word of DANGER


To tempt you I'm adding in a scene that anyone could just gush over.Mind you I typed it all out cause, well, duh. 
Say hello to male leads Sylvain and Carter (had to omit some  things to keep the story a secret):

... "Now we shall enjoy the croquet."
"Yay," she replied weakly. "Croquet."
As they walked back around the corner, she could see that everyone had been waiting for them, including Carter, His eyes told her that he knew exactly what they'd been doing.
"Allie! Sylvain." His tone was mocking. "This is great. What have you been up to?"
Surprised by his aggression, Allie flushed with anger.
...
Sylvain pulled her closer. "Unfortunately, Carter, our teams are set already. We do not need  another player."
"I didn't come to play." Carter put emphasis on the last word. 
...
He turned from Sylvain to her.
Allie felt as if a cool breeze had chilled her skin. "I... I'm fine, Carter. Thanks."
She faltered under his gaze, which seemed to challenge her. As if she'd done something bad, disappointed him in some way. 
"That's great. You do seem much recovered." His words dripped sarcasm. "Did you hurt your lips, too? Or is it from something else?"
Allie's hand flew up to cover her mouth as Sylvain took several steps forward. 
"Why are you still here, Carter?" he asked icily.
Carter stared at him, unflinching. "I just wanted to see if what I suspected was true."
"Seen all you need to see?" Sylvain's voice was low and menacing. 
"Hey, everybody," Ruth stepped between them. "Come on. Stay calm. Let's not get into something here."
Carter ignored her. "Oh, I've seen enough, Sylvain."
With a sigh, Ruth stepped out of the way. They were now standing no more than a foot apart, glaring at each other.

Now who wouldn't want to get in between them to - ahem - break up the fight? And only a foot apart. Hmmm. 
Anyway, I read her Acknowledgements at the back. I found it fitting that this book sprouted from a dare. But it was gut-wrenching to know her mother couldn't see the finished product. I'm glad to add to C.J.'s fanbase though! 

Saturday, 31 December 2016

Happy New Year

So how's everyone doing as we bring in the new year? 

I went to a sale and added more to the family. I've got my two temporary shelves and just put up my books. Or tried to. What was I thinking, two isn't enough! 

Now the books are strewn on the floors. Either piled high or like dominos. 

But I actually feel quite cozy. 

Plan to continue my reviews at a steadier pace and participate in more giveaways πŸ˜† 

And definitely continue writing. 

I wanna hear book plans from everyone, so anyone feel free to comment! 
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Friday, 2 December 2016

The Festive Book Sale

The finished look. Gorgeous dim lighting and wonderful looking with all the effort we put into it. 

Of course for book browsers we had to light it up

The special Bag o' Surprises! Books pre- or still loved by the team and contributed to those who finish our Exhibition Quiz (shown later)

(Above two photos aren't by me.)



A little of the exhibition. Close to 10 million hours = 19 years of hard work ... and blood, sweat and tears (next photo with my copy)


#intheworks: The 9,986,400 Hours Showcase of all our #bloodsweatandtears will be happening as part of our Festive Book Sale this weekend (From 11-8pm on Friday to 11-5pm on Saturday and Sunday)! Come check it out when it's all done! 

#sglit #singlit #factoftheday #thetruthbehind #showcase #bookcoverdesign #troublemaker #books


I tried to take a nice panorama. Looks amazing this way! 



Cute little bargain corner 



Wrapped up nicely for the book bundles. I have ribbon skills. Who knew 



Empty before the day ran out haha



Made a humongous sign. Two A3s





I love my signages!!! 

Sunday, 27 November 2016

When your ideas are used for syllabus without consent

You were just told to write it with no idea where it was going

Three different openings WITH my own descriptions she never had before

You do it for the kids

She reaps the benefit

And copyrights it for herself

What a joke



Sunday, 20 November 2016

MUST READ: Living Hell - Catherine Jinks


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Living Hell is a serious survival-horror-action-science fiction novel. I never experienced anything like it when I read it when I was around 13 years old and I still remember it sooo many years on. I'm talking like 9-ish. AND this is the cover, ladies and gentlemen. Isn't it epic?

What happens when a single moment changes everything? For seventeen-year-old Cheney, life on earth exists only in history books. He and more than one thousand other people have known life only aboard the Plexus spacecraft: self-contained, systematic, and serene. But that was before the radiation wave.

Now Plexus has suddenly turned on them, becoming a terrifying and unrecognizable force. As the crew dwindles under attack, Cheney and his friends need to fight back before the ship that’s nurtured them for so long becomes responsible for their destruction.

from Goodreads
 
You felt it
Near the beginning 
The more he described what plexus had as safety barriers - which I have to say Caroline probably did immense research on (heat-resistant porous films..what?)- the more likely everything was gonna go south 
The set up was all there.Though it may seem a bit draggy by the enormous explanations of everything aboard Plexus, it does provide you with the world - kinda - that Caroline has created. 

Having more than a dozen characters to think for and write about is a feat. They had their quirks and own voices to contribute to the story. None seemed irrelevant, which is fantastic. All characters should be used usefully (yeah I had to)

As the synopsis goes, Plexus turned..it became a force. Imagine that your own home has become a war zone. You have to fight, run, hide just to survive. Unfortunately for them, they can't just get out. They're in space. You don't get a chance to blink or even breathe when the next moment hits you. Living Hell is a true thriller.

"You are my greatest achievement"
That line will always get me. 


I love the way Catherine wrote. She didn't simply describe the state of Plexus but let us know what was happening through her characters, especially the panicked voices. 
You could write *SPOILER* "pink goo" or you could have Cheney discover it. He's seventeen but the way he calls out '"Dad?" .. "Dad?"' he seems seven. And it's amazing. 
Or by shouts like "Argh!" and "Moving!"
Catherine takes you into the world by doing this. 
you can tell everyone has been scared so bad they're reduced to children. It's mayhem and fear and worry throughout from such powerful - it doesn't always have to be thought-provoking, sometimes it can just be full of emotion - dialogue. 
I was either biting my lip or completely grim-faced, brows furrowed and all. 

 This was stupendous. And how often do you hear people use this word. 
I've read it before but I still remember that rush and suspense as the countdown ended. 
If you really want to understand the meaning of "calm before the storm", this is it.
What followed was this incredible scene. It was as if there was a visible sigh of relief all around because, hey, it seemed like danger has passed. 
But like any plot, if it's too early in the pages something is about to go down. 


 It was a fearsome way to show us the inexplicable change. Though there wasn't really a proper idea within the story - the synopsis does give you a huge clue - as to why the self-preserving space home went berserk, with so much action you don't really have time to think. 

To skip ahead.. 

*SPOILER*

"The human body?" conclusion was what I was waiting for! 

I now feel if characters get truly heroic - and you know with heroism in the mid of books, it's gonna ..well we always hope it turns out - they should get a picture/page

Cheney matured in that split second he had to be the "grown-up" amongst his peers was a significant moment. You could tell he had changed. From his sort of seven-year-old self. I mean, didn't anyone else forget his age in the way he was reacting to situations? Minus his clever intuition and training. 
(Not that I would have been better) 

I felt Arkwright remained extremely true to what I believe his character was - ultimate dependable, intelligent, brave. 
Brave is certainly right. Somehow his decision at the last moment which saved..as many as they could. I would have written "everyone" but... yeah.
*SPOILER*
His self-sacrifice was amazing. And probably why it was described rather than in dialogue because of his heroism. 

Sloan was a character I was the most confused with, though I remember initially liking him.
He exuded the perfect specimen type. Initially. As I read I grew to like him.. less actually. 
*SPOILER* 
I don't know if the passing of his parents did truly affect him, which it should have. You can tell he wasn't exactly normal 
He had this hero complex. It's possible he believed he was invincible. From parts like trying to go up against a gobbling monster with a laser pen - I'm nice so I hoped he was attempting to give everyone a chance to escape but maybe he didn't make it. 
Of course he was only mentioned in passing at the end, in sobs and Cheney's shock
This question will haunt me unless the dear author has made a comment somewhere about why :')

The epilogue is saddening but thought-provoking. 
I can imagine that though it was for self-preservation of Plexus...this homicidal manic entity is not far from showing us a massacre, which does happen in real life. Wars, violence, blind mass killings. 
We need to understand the fragility. 

Cheney's last line:

"So I have placed on record this story of our transformation. It's a moral tale, to some degree. We have learned, most painfully. that our command of life was built on fragile foundations - that pride, in effect, comes before a fall. That there will always be change, no matter how hard you might strive for stability. And that, like me, you may have a destiny you can't escape."

Leave you to mull over that

It's a MUST READ for me. Let me know what you think too :)

Monday, 31 October 2016

#watchFALLENtrailer


Is everything becoming a movie now? :-P
Not that I mind. It's nice to see interpretations of the books we read - just... when it's done right, of course.

Fallen the movie will be out next week (November 10 2016)

Who else is excited!!!!


I apologise if the quality is terrible. It's uploaded straight :-o


Catch the trailers here:

Lauren's Twitter for #Fallen italia

From Cathay Cineplexes 



From YouTube - the international trailer!!




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γ€€γ€€γ€€π‘΄π’†π’Žπ’‘π’‰π’Šπ’”, π‘¬π’ˆπ’šπ’‘π’•
γ€€γ€€γ€€γ€€γ€€ πŸ‘πŸπŸŽπŸŽ 𝐚.𝐜.
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❛❛𝐴𝑛𝑑 𝑑h𝑒𝑛 𝑠h𝑒 π‘π‘œπ‘’π‘™π‘‘ π‘œπ‘›π‘™π‘¦ π‘ π‘π‘Ÿπ‘’π‘Žπ‘š.
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 From the tumblr of http://aranelb.tumblr.com/post/146905596542/menphis-egitto

This is SO sexy! Kudos!!

Publishers Weekly October 2016

I just got the chance to take a gander at the Publishers Weekly for this month (yes I know it's ending already!) but I just had to show the iBooks Bestsellers list

I have heard of quite a few of these books but I'm ashamed to say I haven't read them yet. Well, all but one: Magic Binds. I LOVE Ilona Andrews - the first time I read the Kate Daniels series I was hooked. I was so delighted to see this particular series' book up there I had to post the rest!

If anyone has read any of these titles and wants to recommend them please let me know :)

I will read them but with no priority - will probably be going by reviews from other sites, which is not something  I usually do as a matter of fact.

Top 10 Science Fiction & Fantasy

  1. Flatlander - Larry Niven

  2. Fragmented - Terry Schott

  3. Magic Binds - Ilona Andrews

  4. Alastair Stone chronicles boxed set - R.L. King

  5. A Night Without Stars - Peter F. Hamilton

  6. Navigators of Dune - Herbert/Anderson

  7. The Name of the Wind - Patrick Rothfuss

  8. The Three-Body Problem - Cixin Liu

  9. Ecotopia - Ernest Callenbach

  10. Ender's Game - Orson Scott Card


Top 15 Fiction & Literature

  1. The Girl on the Train - Paula Hawkins

  2. Commonwealth - Ann Patchett

  3. A Man Called Ove - Fredrik Backman

  4. The Woman in Cabin 10 - Ruth Ware

  5. Pirate - Cussler/Burcell

  6. The 19th Wife - David Ebershoff

  7. The Underground Railroad - Colson Whitehead

  8. Isle of Palms - Dorothea Benton Frank

  9. The Night Watch - Sarah Waters

  10. Diary of an Oxygen Thief - anonymous

  11. Truly Madly Guilty - Liane Moriarty

  12. The Nightingale - Kristin Hannah

  13. The Mermaid Chair - Sue Monk Kidd

  14. The Light Between Oceans - M.L. Stedman

  15. Is This Tomorrow - Caroline Leavitt




 

The YA Authors - like Jay Asher, Leigh Bardugo, Louise Gornall - have turned advocates which is brilliant to hear / read. It's taking that step further and they're making a difference. Something I aspire to.

I think Crooked Kingdom seems like a priority read!



And just a little congratulations JIMMY Patterson Books for their first YA, Stalking Jack the Ripper - Kerri Maniscalco

It's on the Yahoo! New York Times Bestseller list at #1! I mean, come on. Huge applause!